Sexism in Language
Most writers nowadays understand they should use humanity instead of mankind, synthetic instead of man-made, firefighters instead of firemen, and so on. But even if you avoid sexist language, it’s still easy to let sexist assumptions creep into your writing. Quick: think of an animal. Is it male or female? Why?
When I write example sentences for this blog, I like to notice which gender immediately springs to mind—and then choose the opposite. Or I don’t specify gender at all.
- The little dragon’s father picked her up from school every day.
- We infiltrated the soirée by posing as “Dr. and Mr. Opeyemi.”
- The chef’s swearing could be heard in every corner of her restaurant.
- Never come between a grad student and their coffee.
- The Rampaging Rabbit rode her trusty snail, Sparkles, into battle.
You can find more examples of nonsexist language at the Canadian Style website.
She, He, and They
It used to be that he was considered acceptable for all situations; obviously, that is no longer the case. Some writers use he or she or he/she, but these are verbally and visually awkward. Another choice is to alternate between she and he, either paragraph by paragraph or chapter by chapter, which is better but not ideal. One can come across as too formal or just clunky: One should always clear one’s browser history after one has finished one’s transactions on the dark Web.
Then there’s they. Most guides to formal writing insist they should be used with plural subjects only. To avoid gendered pronouns, they advise, you should make your sentence’s subject plural, or address your reader directly, as you.
- Each student must bring his own wand. X
- All students must bring their own wands. ✓
- You must bring your own wand. ✓
But while it’s frowned upon by formal style guides, the singular they is gradually gaining acceptance (see How I Learned to Stop Worrying and Love the Singular They). Unless your audience is particularly fastidious, this is the most natural-sounding choice, since English speakers use it all the time in conversation.
- Each student must bring their own wand.
- Someone left their superhero costume in the phone booth.
Another reason to embrace the singular they is that it doesn’t exclude nonbinary people. A nonbinary person doesn’t identify themselves as purely male or female. While a variety of alternative pronouns have been coined, they is probably the most widely used. (That said, you should favour whatever pronouns the person themself uses.) The most recent edition of The Chicago Manual of Style has approved the singular they—along with themself—for this purpose.
- We’re going out for drinks to congratulate Sloane on their promotion.
Transgender (sometimes shortened to trans) is the appropriate descriptor, not transgendered. Its counterpart for people who are not transgender is cisgender (or cis). Use transgender as you would any other adjective.
- Jim is a tall man.
- Jim is a trans man.
- The woman leading the sensitivity workshop is South Asian.
- The woman leading the sensitivity workshop is transgender.
A transgender person hasn’t changed their gender—they’re expressing the gender they’ve always been. The only change is between living as the gender they were mistakenly handed out as a baby and living as the gender they actually are.
- Tony was born a girl. X
- Tony was assigned female at birth. ✓
- At four years old, our son told us he was really a girl. X
- At four years old, our daughter, who we’d believed was a boy, told us she was really a girl. ✓
Transitioning is the process of altering one’s birth sex. This may involve hormone therapy, surgery, both, or neither. The details are personal and irrelevant to anyone else; when someone tells you their gender, that’s all you need to know. Using someone’s name or pronouns from before they transitioned is disrespectful, even when you’re writing about the past.
- Before Selena became a woman, he was a male tennis player named Alfonso. X
- Before Selena transitioned, she won several trophies in men’s tennis. ✓
Just as we need to unlearn the cultural myth that there are only two, rigidly defined genders, we need to let go of the idea that sex is dictated by biology. As much as 1.7 percent of people are born intersex, with chromosomes or genitalia that don’t correlate with either sex as it’s usually defined. The choice of “male” or “female” is often made by parents and doctors before the child can have any say in the matter.
Given the variation in sex and gender, it’s important to make sure your language includes all possibilities. For example, don’t assume only women menstruate or get pregnant.
- On the bus, always give up your seat to pregnant women. X
- On the bus, always give up your seat to pregnant people. ✓
For more on trans-inclusive language, visit The Radical Copyeditor’s Style Guide for Writing About Transgender People.
LGBTQ (sometimes LGBTQIA or LGBT+) stands for lesbian, gay, bisexual, transgender, and queer (or questioning ); the I and A are for intersex and asexual. It’s a broad term for a community that includes more than just gays and lesbians, and it’s not only about sexual orientation—transgender and intersex people may identify as straight.
The LGBTQ acronym is the term most commonly used when discussing this group, as it’s much more inclusive than, say, gay. (Obviously LGBTQIA is more inclusive than LGBTQ.) Another broadly inclusive word is queer, which is preferred by lots of people whose identities straddle one or more categories. However, queer is used less often outside academic contexts.
Using inclusive language means not assuming your reader is straight. Spouse is preferable to husband or wife not just because it avoids sexism but also because it makes room for same-sex couples.
- The mad scientists usually bring their wives to the supervillains gala. X
- The mad scientists usually bring their spouses to the supervillains gala. ✓
Other options are partner and significant other, both of which include long-term couples who aren’t married.
- Husbands should discuss major criminal decisions with their wives. (excludes same-sex and unmarried couples, assumes roles based on gender)
- Men should discuss major criminal decisions with their spouses. (excludes unmarried couples and still gives primacy to men)
- Couples should discuss major criminal decisions together. (includes same-sex couples, unmarried couples, and nonbinary people, and doesn’t assume roles based on gender)
When you’re writing for or about young people, who may still be figuring out their sexuality and gender (or working up the courage to express them), it’s important to leave room for multiple possibilities.
- Are there any boys you have a crush on? X
- Is there anyone you have a crush on? ✓
Such possibilities include asexuality. Asexuals, who make up about one percent of the population, don’t experience sexual attraction to others, or they feel no desire to act on such attraction. Try not to perpetuate sad-sack stereotypes about people who prefer not to pursue sex and/or relationships.
- Though successful as a painter, Marie-Victoire Lemoine never married. X
- Single all her life, Marie-Victoire Lemoine successfully supported herself with her painting. ✓
Even when you’re writing about an opposite-sex couple, don’t assume they’re straight. One or both of them might identify as bisexual; dating or marrying a person of the opposite sex doesn’t negate someone’s bisexuality. Or they might be asexual, or genderqueer, or nonbinary, or . . .
- Women swooned over Cary Grant. (not inclusive)
- Women and gay men swooned over Cary Grant. (more inclusive)
- Women, gays, and bi men swooned over Cary Grant. (even more inclusive)
- Filmgoers swooned over Cary Grant. (most inclusive)
This is the second post in the Inclusive Language series. The introductory post can be found here. Still to come are Disability and Neurodivergence, Race and Ethnicity, and Class and Income.
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